by Rachel RTVW Dec 18, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Beautiful impressionable little Jazz |
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Is Jazzlyn your daughter? Such a lovely tribute to someone! Lovely job on this poem! Great rhyming and flow! |
by Cindy
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You are a natural! Great job. None of us want our children to make our mistakes. All we can do is pray and hope. That they have learned what we have taught them. excellent writing |
by debbylyn
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It's hard growing up in today's world. We can only hope Jazz will choose the right path. Nice job on the poem 5/5 |