For the love of a father

by Landi Cordier   Dec 18, 2006


You never made a sacrifice
you never even tried
you missed my last 5 birthdays
and even before that you only visited once
after seeing me for the third time
you told me I'm a rebel,
but how the hell can you say that
you clearly don't know me at all!

where were you on Christmas day?
even new year's would have worked
for all i craved for, for years
was the love of a father
who didn't care

*plz comment/vote*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is sad. Pouring with emotion. Very heartfelt and I am sure many can relate.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    * Oh Wow. I feel the same about my father, but he never said i was a rebel tho. Amazing poem 5/5 Great emotions put into this.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    * this is my favorite so far.. and i can reltate.. the only thing i would change is the 4th line.. its too long

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥a divine dream♥

    I can really relate to this one..i really like it!

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