I dreamt of you last night

by Landi Cordier   Dec 19, 2006


I dreamt of you last night
With tears running down my side,
Your eyes so blue,
Your hair so blonde

Your wife not there,
All of them gone,

Dead,
I killed them,
I had to - for the sake of my own heart,

We had a life you know,
But then it fell apart -

You married that..
That.. thing.
On her finger you put a pretty ring

She cried
She begged,
She kicked
And screamed

My heart stone cold,
Her face grew old,
With Worry and fear.

I did it all for you my dear.

But then I woke up -
And I admit that I'm sad,
I know,
Because I dreamt bout you last night

(for a contest - vote plzXxXx)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    *It sounds like a nightmare Stephen King would write about or make a movie out of LOL. Flow and rhyme scheme need some work but you still did a nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    * oh Wow. I felt the hate clearly in this poem. Amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    * yeah um.. sorry i forgot the star thing in the last comment this is a part of the 10 for 15

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I rreally like this poem.. but i dont understand why you sperateted your poem the way you did...?? parts are actual stanzas and then some are just like random words.. but i still really like it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by steve

    Man, kinda creepy but deffinately good, sound a little possesive lol i think it was great it flowed very easily 5/5

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