When the light comes alive..

by Bridget   Dec 20, 2006


The light slants through the window,
Illuminating the floor,
But moves away as the curtain flickers,
Now pausing on the wall.

It dances all over my room,
A duet with the breeze,
As soon as the curtain becomes still,
The light itself will freeze.

It becomes brighter as a cloud frees the sun,
I try to shield my eyes.
The light keeps on partying, stronger than before,
Inviting more friends inside.

The whole room is filled with light now,
Every flicker of light is an individual being,
They chose my room to have a disco,
So exhilarating, definitely worth seeing.

I get up and join in,
Dancing, getting to know the light
We are wild, ecstatic all through the day
Until suddenly it is night.

The room is no longer alive,
The wild vibe that was there has fleed.
The curtain is still flapping,
But the light has gone to sleep.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow. i loved your detailing again! again, it really painted this picture. i could like picture everything you wrote in my head. it was really amazing. i dont know what else to say except keep up the amazing work:) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Briddy,
    Great job on this poem. Ireally enjoyed reading this! Keep up the good work. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    This poem was beautiful hun thanks for your comment on my poem "Mother of all" I enjoy your point of view on it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    What is LSD?

  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    That poem reminds me of some of the times i took LSD. but anyway the rhyme was good and i quite liked it