Numb

by Linzii   Dec 20, 2006


Numb as can be
My body breaks free
My mind is racing
Over this pain I'm facing
The crimson drips from these veins
As the blade is slicing away
I can no longer be taken by the guilt of falling for you

HEy guys if you would comment my poem/poems plz cause i would like to know if you like them or not

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  • 17 years ago

    by missy

    It's quite good. I loved the starting, but the flow got lost at the end. The concept is good though...I'm off to read your other work.
    You can always check out my poems too, i'd appreciate it.

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