My hero

by Ashley   Dec 21, 2006


MY HERO

I use to think I was all alone,
No good for anyone at all.
When I would lay in my bed at night,
I dreamed of when I would find my hero,
Dreamed of how he would come and take all my pain away.
of him coming and takeing me away,
Away from this life I lived, this life I hated.

Then one day my dream came true,
My hero came, saved me, made me feel love again,
And that hero is you.

You are my hero, you saved me from my pain,
You are my hero, you made it all go away.
You are my hero, you made me feel whole again;
You are my hero, you made it all worth living for.

My hero, every time you touch me, I feel like an angel.
My hero, every time you look into my eyes, I go crazy,
Crazy for Im in love with you my hero.

Thank you my hero, for coming into my life,
For loving me.
I cant ever thank you enough,
for what you have done in my life.
My hero, I love you, I love everything you do,
Everything you say to me, I store up in my heart.

You truly are, And always will be

MY HERO

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  • 17 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    This is a really interesting poem. This is how I feel about the love of my life, though we're apart at this time...
    I'm sorry it took me so long to comment back. I hope you don't mind so critizism from poet to poet. This is a good piece of work, but you should go through & reread this. You have a few grammatical errors. It's really good though. I'm not going to vote, because I don't like voting people down for things they can change.
    -Heather

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    This is my 5 poemi ve written.
    As you can tell all the poems I write are love poems.And written for one person.The love of my life.
    I wrote this one a few days after he told me he has always wanted a girl to call him their hero.Im going to work on it a bit more,,change some things.and give it to him for christmas.:0
    Please tell me if i should change anything and how you liked it. Yo ucan say whatever you want.
    Thanks guys.