Sacrifice

Long nights, and fearful tears
Is how she felt all the nights, she sacrificed time and energy
For a boy she barely eve knew, but she knew God had a plan for them
So she was willing to pursue, willing to take the challenge
He wasn’t the best guy she knew, but she knew with God that would all change
At first they got to know each other, then things got challenging
He wasn’t a strong Christian and did a lot of things he wondered why she didn’t like
He tried to convince her that it all in the Bible
She felt a heavy burden on her heart, knew for a fact it wasn’t at all true
Fights began, tears flowed, one year later feelings appeared, he wanted her, she wanted God
She went through a bad breakup while all this happened, began to rebel against all she believed
Feelings appeared in her then too, she began thinking, and things got rough
She felt lonely, scared, and in pain. She began to cut her wrists
Thinking it would relieve stress and much of the pain she had felt
Few knew, told her it wasn’t right but she didn’t care
She began to go farther, got to know the boy a little more, he told her it wasn’t right but didn’t stop her, he saw the marks all this rebellion had caused, and it wasn’t only her, but her friend too
Her friend had been dating her coworker
9th grade dance March 4th, her friend came to do her hair, she was up getting ready
Her friend goes upstairs, bawling shaking, and scared to death
Told her two nights before things got out of hand with them
She lost her innocence that night; she sacrificed her innocence to bounce the both of them back
Knowing that God had to be first, once the boy knew, she didn’t want him, she wanted God
For many months she prayed asked God what plans he had for the both of them
They got to know who God really was as a couple,
Knowing and thanking God for protecting her best friend
But for protecting the two of them in a relationship that possible could last a lifetime.

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