I rly loved this one!! Great job! 5/5

Lovely!

Can u plz comment me back? :)

That was really good, try to avoid using number symbols though!!

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Thanks for the comment on my quote, it was too big to sumbit as a quote so I submitted it as a poem :p I really like this! the emotion in it is so powerful, like the broken water pipe part, good job! :)

Loved it!!!

Loved the poem =)

I loved this.