Her love

by October Rain   Dec 23, 2006


She was in love with you
You told her you cared for her
But in the end you lied to her you didnt care for her.
She helped you when you were in trouble
But you didnt seem to care she did that for you.
You made her feel like she wasnt wanted
She wanted to love you forever
But you wouldnt even be her friend
You just dumped her like she wasnt anything.
She feels numb since you dont care for her
That started the day you threw her out
How could you not see she loves you? She wonders what It would be. If you cared for her. Like she does you. she would be so happy. But you didt make her dreams come true. When she made all of yours come true.
She told me she cried for a week
It was because of you
She poured her heart out to you
And you crushed it.
No matter how many times you push her out
She will always love you.
Until the end of time.

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  • 17 years ago

    by neena

    I can feel your pain from this poem your a great poet!

    *N*e*E*n*A*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tenisha

    Awww how sweet but yet so sad well i liked it good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    I rlly like this one... but i could cut em up in like 4 pieces... ;)
    i think it would be better that way:) but this way it still is pretty good :)
    keep on writing

    GRTZ Spike

  • 17 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    Aww. That's sad! Had a lot of emotion in it. I liked it. 5/5
    Good job.

    Keep it up!

    -Mallory

  • 17 years ago

    by Nathan Hickling

    Very good poem, could tell the pain through your words. keep up the good work

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