Her frozen heart

by Mitchel   Dec 23, 2006


Must you heart
still be frozen?
for i still feel its icy touch

As the cold winds
breeze on by
i try to find a way in

but

Its blocking its path
with walls
of petrified tears

I try
to diminish the ice
by relighting my
ember for you

I try and try again
but it will not melt,
or crack one bit

My fire for you
never blazed enough
did it?

wait...

now i know
you have made it clear

and this is always
what i feared

that path
is only to break
when he comes again

to fall right back
for you...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    PS PS PS: Thanks 4 your lovely comment

    Take Care

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Aww..Thats soo sad. Which means its really good!
    I liked your writing style!
    Tis pretty good!
    But one suggestion..i think you should make it a tiny lil bit longer..jus a suggestion...but its really good right now as well!
    5/5 ^_^

    Keep SMiling
    `*-Tormented

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Ohmigod, that so sad. i was gonna cry. =[