My First Everything

by Midnight Sun   Dec 23, 2006


Rays of morning sunshine
Break through the pane of glass
As I see you lying there
I reflect on our past

For you were my first
In any aspect you could fulfill
And when I think my one and only love
I think of you and only you, still

And as I reminisce on us
Our memories have a reoccurring theme
We always loved and thought of one another
Even in our night's and daydreams

You see my dear one
You were my first love
The first to make me fly
Even as gracefully as the dove

So even as I jump
Into the unknown
You are the first to catch me
When everyone else disowns

Yes you were my first
My first love and kiss
The first to give me chills
You're the first one I miss

And now as I awake
You are my first thought
And you will be my last
For no one else have I sought

So here's to my first
And my only
Thank you for ending
My night's so lonely

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  • 19 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    I can deffinitley relate to this. It was very beautiful, and touching. It had a lot of emotion in it.. Very heartfelt piece. I loved the title, as well. Very catchy.

    A couple suggestions, though:

    You see me dear one [I think that'd read better as: You see MY dear one]

    The first make me fly [ & this doesn't really make sense.. I think you should put a 'to' after first.]

    Just suggestions though.

    Great job, overall.

    Bri.x

  • 19 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    *Sigh* Great feeling, huh? I loved it and I can totally relate! Thanks for adding me! *Clicks faves*
    xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Good poem. I enjoyed it....beautiful sentiments.

  • 19 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    And now as I awake
    You are my first thought
    And you will be my last
    For no one else have I sought

    I think that was my favorite stanza. I liked the title...you just knew it was gonna be good. For some reason in your last line of the 3rd stanza...it just didn't flow right to me. But hey, just a suggestion. Can't wait to read your other new ones! Good job!
    Charisma*

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