Comments : Broken December

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    OMG
    this is just so sad.
    but very greatly written, keep up the great job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    Thats a nice and sad poem. not bad at all. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Wow, thats brillent! 5/5 well done!!!!
    i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan Raff

    Very deep, very emotional and sad. Overall, though, very nicely written and a good poem. Nice job =).

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    The imagery was astounding, the wording was a joy to read, the rhyme scheme and flow worked very well.
    I think you did an excellent job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    And this is the opem that won my contest. I love this poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Very good poem, good flow and wording, i loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    This poem won. ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This was very well written. You did a great job on it. The imagery and flow was flawless.

    I commented on this one because I couldn't find your French poem you submitted for the contest. Now that was pure Talent. I am trully envious your talent with French and it translated very beautifully. You have a real knack with words. I had a friend read it to me in French and it was such a nicee sounding piece.

    Keep it up
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great poem. Each stanza held a feeling that continued to enhance what you wanted the reader to have. Powerful writing in this poem, keep up the amazing work.

  • 17 years ago

    by RJ

    Youre very talented... I love your poems...

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This one is good too... but it confuses me...

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I may have inrerpreted this meaning wrong but i thought it was amazing. If what i'm thinking is right, you are so very talented to be able to put it into such bittersweet beautiful words..
    Well done indeed
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Amazing. Thats all i can say...

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    I enjoyed this poem a lot

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I love the imagery, it's a really great poem. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    That was truely an amazing poem. I loved your word choice, and it just sent CHILLS down by body. I'm kind of confused on what happened, though. Did you kill someone in december? Or did you actually kill the month of december? I'm alittle slow today. >.> Anyways, it doesn't matter if I understand it, because I still love it. Haha. *Adding this to my favorite poems*

    Keep writing!
    Cayce