Angel in hell

by mathiax   Dec 26, 2006


I was born an angel
With feathery wings that excel
And a golden ring above my head
But raised as a devil by natural ground
My wings replaced by an ugly tail and fangs
My ring was broken to make room for horns
Raised and taught by the master himself
In a place full of evil and fiery dungeons which he made by himself
Only the mother was pure
She was a wonderful woman and so true
A woman who fell in love with a fiendish man
An angel in a hellish pain
Married to the maker of nightmares and thoughts which are worse
Trapped away in the pit less lair that we call our home
Her wings were clipped when she said I do
So she could never fly away if her heart wished to
She’s trapped in that pitiless room
Like a prisoner awaiting his doom
Never looking forward to life
Always blaming herself for her fate
Always blaming herself for my being here in this misery
So she makes the best of it by teaching me how to be high-quality
To become an angel for life I must become worthy
By keeping my heart clean of any hate
And keeping my mind empty of any vice
And keeping my soul true and chaste
Ill earn my keep in heaven one date
Then ill be free from this hellish dwelling
And of to heaven where I belong
Then my last mission would be to free my mother
The one who saved me from an endless torture
That her love has besotted on her by her so called life partner

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    Eh.. well.. reading this poem got back alot of memories.. of ur life ofcourse.. and i remembered everythin u went through.. i find it really amazing the way u expressed ur feelings .. using the angel and devil thingy ... LOVED IT ! .. keep them coming hun bun .. u got the talent ! ;)

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Thnx RoseAmi!!! im glad that you liked it^_^!!! its a true story but exagerated and made to look like a fairytale=P its my parents story in fact... thnx alot for your comment hope to hear from you soon^_0!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Lloooooooooooooooooool!!!! thnx locks!! its my second rhyming poem!XD!!! and i love how this one turned out!!! btw i think ill be writting more of this type of poetry in the future!! and thnx for the comment!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Damm your good watch out B you have a contender lol
    great poem 5/5

    btw sucked in B i am 1st to comment
    boyuh