Live for the moment

by bon   Dec 27, 2006


Ima play the game, with nothing to lose
ima play the game, no need for rules
i play it my way, ya don't like it get gone
but don't come cry'n back when you know you dun wrong

Nothing in this life anymore, seems to be a bit fair
doesn't seems like most of y'all friends even care
When you lose someone it hurts now don't it
From now on, since tomorrow ain't promise..ima live for the moment

I know it's short but please comment and rate.

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  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Hmm...this poem didn't seem to work for me.

    I needed to read it more than twice to even get what you were saying, none the less what the meaning of this poem is. It confused me, and I didn't find it satisfying to my standards.

    The flow was ok, but could be improved. But the grammar was horrible. Maybe this was intentional, or maybe it wasn't. But it makes it 10 times harder to read than I can guarantee it took to write. I'm sure you'll get the hang of this. Keep it up. =) 4/5 xxoo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is good but maybe you should add some more to it.but its good the way it is.

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