Gray Sunday (When She's Gone)

by Unrequited   Dec 31, 2006


You can watch me fall
teardrops upon silk
you will melt in my eyes
as my heart continues to wilt
you will leave
and i'll be gone

gray Sunday
it's all over now
i don't want this
memories to be erased
my lips craving your taste
but it's lost
distant smiles will move on
carry on
into the skies of nothing true
empty, i bleed tears of blue-
neglected hearts hit the floor

i'll be gone
when you move on
as i sing
this mournful song
your heart keeps me breathing
your eyes kept me believing
but now you've gone
where i don't belong
within sorrow,
i reach the end

the bleeding...
the bleeding...
it won't be long

'til i'm gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Wow..thats really good! i love it. ican feel the emotion in it. 5/5

    xo kisses xo

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aw. this was so good. the vocab was perfect. i wouldnt change a thing. well done.
    Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The ending was really showed much emotion. it was evident something happened to you. but the vivid description was perfect!

    5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Genau man. I think you captured the feelings that unreturned or newly deceased love often creates. The lack of hope and self-perceived bleakness of the world. And most importantly it's easy to relate to. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Oh tom...this is so heartbreaking...no no no its not close to the end, you can't leave...

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