She is me

by kelley   Jan 1, 2007


Quivering quietly
your
lifeless love
washes her
bloody blisters
trapt in torment
haunted by hatred
willingly wilting
taunted with tragedy
loathing life
addicted to accidents
shes
fircefully fighting
with all of her
meaningless might
bitten by bitterness
shes trying to
map out of madness
intense imparment
shes
foreign to forgivness
her relentless regret
is hushing her hatfully
the
sensual sensation
and
powerful passion
giving her
pointless patients
to help her through her
innocent insanity

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    GREAT ALLITERATION!!! heres another tip USE COMMAS there necessary they add DRAMA to poetry use them lol lol but i love this one the best AMAZING. please comment mine if u can thnxs.

  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    I like this one but agree u should add to it keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by hagar

    Keep going

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