Prettypoem. nice job with the rhyming. i can't rhyme well enough, go you. and the last stanza, amazing. it was my favorite part. so pretty. and im glad you like my poem mistaken. i was srta wondering if you had time to rate adn comment it on my site thing. please and thank you. 5/5.

Its beautiful, 1st place for sure

I love this poem. short and sweet. and flooding with detailed emotion. i like the way u make common ordinary plots or schemes that have been tired out by others, nito something worth reading. it's never old when u write it. and u got the phone calls poem rite. exactly on the dot.
love ya lots,
sore

A very heartfelt poem, so full of emotion... Beautifully written as always hun, I think You should do well in the contest with this... It flowed superbly... Well done 5/5 xx

Wow this poem is really good. I know exactly how it feels to have a broken heart and you never want to love again. But the truth is love is the only thing that can break and fix a heart. Excellent poem 5/5

What a nice sad love poem. I really like the ending. Your flow and rhyme were good. Nice job!

Oh my gosh. When I finished this poem and read that it was for a contest, I was convinced that it must have won the contest because it is just so very well written! 5/5

Excellent job! I love it! The flow was good, but I thought the flow on the 3rd stanza was a little off, but it could just be me:S Overall, I thought this is very well-written. I can certainly relate to this poem! Well done!
5/5

What a beautiful job you have done on this poem. I loved the flow. Excellent!

Bravo worded greatly keep up the good work=]

This flowed well, a very sad poem.
very emotional, something we can relate to very well indeed.
keep writing
xxxx

This is a very good poem tammie, loved the flow, i especially like the 2nd stanza, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

This is a also a really sad poem. It again was emotion packed, with emotian in every stanza. The flow was excellent, and good words used. One thing in both your poems, that i think you should of used is punctualtion. Dont get me wronge its a great peom, but i thought it would of been even better with punctuation in. Still enjoyable peaces of writing, keet them up and i do look forward to reading more. xx

I love this one! I'm adding it to my scrapbook! :] 5/5

Wow! i know what you mean...i love this poem a lot..i like the imagery and the description...you have talent and thank you for sharing it with us...keep up the great job :)...5/5 thanks for commenting on mine...

Woa this one had me going from the start! i thougth considering you started it so strong it may fade off but you finished nicely 5/5 absolutly! =)