I want you to need me

by Landi Cordier   Jan 1, 2007


For years and years
I craved your touch,
I craved your kiss
in a nice hot bath

needing your breath
upon my cheek,
wanting your lips
on my tender skin,
blowing a kiss,
a soft warm breeze.

look at me,
even if only once,
and touch me you love me,
kiss me you care.

look at me,
even if only once,
because I want you to need me,
even if only once.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    My favorite poem so far by you but again i have a recomendation

    "needing your breath
    upon my cheek,
    wanting your lips
    on my tender skin,
    blowing a kiss,
    a soft warm breeze."

    in that stanza you should take out either
    "blowing a kiss, a warm soft breeze"
    or
    "wanting you lips on my tender skin"

    or add two more lines and make it into two differnt stanzas of 4

    eihter way it would be perfection for you poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    The bath part made me chuckle. Your poem is every girl's deepest craving and fantasy. I'm sure you'll be given plenty of compliments on it

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I know how you feel here. Everything will come, no worries. Good luck and good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Everybody wants to be needed no matter what, but especially by the ones we need. nice job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Mhmm beautifulllll poem. sweet. the longing for someone to wrap you up in their arms. thats a nice feeling.