by Mousie Jan 1, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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A sparkling lake and sunset, |
by Jenni Marie
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I thought this was really sweet yet sad. |
by Tara Kay
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Mmm, a very nice poem and one that i can really feel, i can relate to this very well, having split with my ex and him moving on without a care, forgetting what we shared. well done |
by Megan
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Loved like always but kinda sad :( |
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You make rhyming look so easy. I meant to tell you that you did a great job rhyming on your last one aswell. Your flow was amazing, and everything else too. You did an amazing job! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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Hmm. it's good. but some of the words can be changed, to make the poem sound better. good job though. |