Hmm.. Steph.. I'm.. .. -sigh-..

I'M FRACKING SPEECHLESS! Dude! This is amazing! I love it!!!! Your rhyming was ... mind blowing.. and your flow... gahh! Okay. dude.. You. Have. Skill. lol... I haven't freaked over a poem in a long time.. You got my favorites. I love your imagination.. share some with me?

Excellent.. Wonderful. AMAZING

5/5!

That was excellent. I love the rhyming and flow, it was practically flawless.

There were just a couple mistakes I found that you might want to correct:

"But the relationship has losted its charm." - 'losted' isn't a word. It should be 'lost'.

"Still, she's stand beside you," - I think you meant something such as 'Still, she stands beside you,'.

Overall though, this poem was excellent. Great work.

Still, she stand beside you,
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you need to add an 's' to stand.

But other then that. i loved this poem. the flow and emotions and structure of this was amazing. there is a greatttt story behind it. it was wonderful.

Awwwwwww good!!!!!!!!!

Awwwwwww good!!!!!!!!!

Awwwwwww good!!!!!!!!!

Awwwwwww good!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful!
I am da*n near speechless! =]
Everything was simply magnificent! Don't change one thing, and I mean anything! =] You're an amazing writer and what you wrote is so heartbreaking because it's true. Fantastic job hun! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Great job on your poem. I really enjoyed reading this. It has alot of emotion.

Sad. has a good concept though. amkes the wonderful girls out there who've been cheated on wanna cry and hopefully the guy who did it...feel regret.

Thanks for sharing your talent its a great piece.

~Emma

Wow, your poems are getting better and better, this poem is just so great, you are a great writer.

Good one....

This is such a shocking yet beautiful poem
your a great writer, 5/5
take care xx

Another awesome poem, by an awesome poet. i love your work. this poem was so good, so deep, so touching, well done
xxxxxxxxxx

Aww i love it

Wow!!!! This is a really good poem!!!! Full of meaning... I'm speechless

Wow.. that was really good. the rhyming was traditional but that's okay, and the rhythm was all great. You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself!

Awh, so sad.
This kind of thing happens so much in life, it's so sad that people have to do such a thing. You've captured it perfectly. I felt like i was in the middle of the story it was just amazing.
i loved:
"Look straight into the camera,
Smiling for the paparatzee of deceit,
Your mind spinning with mistakes you've made,
Horrible things you are bound to repeat."

it was awesome.
GREAT JOB DOLL.

-Amberinaa*
xoxo

Wow..I freakin love that! it has such a good i dunno im speachless!! its awesome! congrads

Wow awsome love it 5/5