Daddy

by Im pervocative and talkative   Jan 5, 2007


Daddy how could you
just leave me here to cry and be alone
with no one to care
no one to tell me it's gonna be OK
you think I'm gonna be OK
but guess what i wont
don't act like you care cuz you don't and when i take the razor and put it to my skin
it'll be just for you

I HATE YOU DAD!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Great emotion. not a lot of poetic merit but i still liked the emotion. i could really feel the anger. i've definatley been where u have been. i hope things get better for you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Im pervocative and talkative

    Thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by MydniteEve

    Woh. it's a good poem with some flaws. but it gives off emotions that flow. good job.

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