Hold you

by Jacob   Jan 6, 2007


Just let me hold you while your falling apart,
And I'll take us back to that place and time.
Where the stars had names, and life was a game.
I'll take care of you, and give us a fresh start.

Just let me hold you while your falling apart
And I'll wash away all the dirt and grime
And protect you from the heat of the flames
Just so your life will finally seem sublime

Just let me hold you while your falling apart
And I'll show you that we're one and the same
That we're both victims of victimless crimes
And I'm here to help share your pain and shame

Just let me hold you while your falling apart.
You'll see that these words are more than just rhymes,
More than just lyrics written without aim.
Their the ashes of my heart, that your love set aflame

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  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Just let me hold your while your falling apart.

    im not sure what went wrong there, but you made the same mistakes in all 4 stanzas!

    its a nice poem, i liked it!
    (oh, plz let me know what you decide to do with not sure yet)

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Woow... this leaves me speechless... amazing write... i love this poem... its the best among the 5 poems that i have read... 5/5 keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by brianna

    That was a really good poem!! i love it. as a girl its just..gosh!!