The things we all have to face

by Liz   Jan 6, 2007


I walk these lonely streets
no knows the things that I see
the secrets that these things keep
the lies they seek, there just to weak
why does it have to be so bleak
why isnt it the way its supposed to be
but thats not how it is today
now I am here standing alone
in this pile of c@!$
watching,waiting
for something to happen
something good but it wont
because of this f^&!#$* depression
everything was took from us
now im standing in front of
what I have left but it nothing
really its like it never existed!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wonderful emotion and truth to it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    You had a very strong poweful and intense beginning...but near the end you sort of lost the intensity. did you stop writing in the middle of this? eh, whatever. still an overall good poem. 5/5 ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Very well written!! i love this poem! its awesome + has great emtions!! keep it up!!

    _Mya_