Will you listen when they say....

by erin   Jan 8, 2007


Will you listen when they tell you all the latest lies and gossip?
will you believe that all of it is true?
even all the shit that not even about me and you?

will you believe me when i reassure you that our love wasn't a mistake?
my hearts been through too much and cant afford another break!

will you listen to all the horrible lies that all my friends say?
please just help me out and even if you don't believe it tell me its all okay!

will you break it off when they tell you that i don't really care?
i think your perfect your eyes, your lips, your nose your hair.

will you believe your heart when it skips a beat?
Ive heard the story before it all goes the same way, please tell me you didn't cheat!

will you believe this poem when you read it?
i meant every word, and i wont rest until you believe it.

thnx 4 reading, PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE, IT WOULD MEAN A LOT TO ME!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Foolish Heart

    Good job
    5/5
    ~christina

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristen

    THis poem has great rhyme and again...i can relate...great job! i enjoy reading your poems...they can be sad but i like them...i showed this poem to a friend of mine and it is her situation so..she cried but she told me to tell the author that she is great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Good poem,
    luv it,
    keep writin,
    ___XOX

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This poem has a great poem.. with a message..
    Keep writing your going to imporove over time..:]
    take care..
    luv,,
    haya 3gab :]

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