by needing a miracle   Jan 8, 2007

The clock keeps ticking.
Time is going by real slow.
I feel my breath escaping.
I can't breath!
Finally, time stops.
I'm finally at peace.


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  • 11 years ago

    by cory

    You proved that a poem doesn't have to be long or rhyme to be great.good job!! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Very short yet good <333

  • 11 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Sweet poem

    nicely written

    keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Fading Memories

    A very expressive yet short poem. Makes it sound like death is painless and easy to succumb to.



  • 11 years ago

    by Kaz

    Deep wrds.. makes death sound so comfortable nd beautiful much better thn wat life is