Picture on My Wrist*Mandz

by Mandz and Aly   Jan 8, 2007


Carve a picture on my wrist
Make sure this is the one to count
Grab the shard of broken glass
And make the picture come to life
Carve the names of the people
Who have hurt you the most
Put them deep to into your wrist
Make sure the picture is clear
Make sure the glass is red
Crimson red is what you want
Make your tears fall into pools
Pools of bloody mistakes
Run the glass just one more time
To make sure there is no room for a mistake
Make sure it slices in your vein
And carve a picture out
Make the picture lasting
Make it clear and clean
Wipe your wrist for the last time
Lay your head down upon your pillow
Grab your teddy hold it tight
Close your eyes and prepare to die

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashmore

    Hey there. It was a great poem, I just hope you don't cut yourself? If you do, I know what you're going through I use to do it myself. If you ever need someone to talk to even though we dont even know each other hey I'll be right here waiting on you okay? Thanks for the comment hun xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Carley

    I love this poem so much.... amanda wow i really like how this one was written..... it really is awesome but sad... lol i started crying kinda gay i know but its way sad.... love ya

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Omg!! WOW this is really good. i love it. it is so deep..i feel the emotion behind it. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Hey yeah I like the poem but you seem like you acually do this?? Is that true?? You might one day end loosing it for ever and never getting anything that you left behind baack so Im just wondering if thats why you wrote a poem that sounded so into it?? Ok well and this isnt InnocentGirlNot its her friend and I like the poem so dont take it bad!

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    WOW!! Great poem!! It looks like you put alot of effort in it. I love the words and how they fall together. Great Job!!
    5/5

    ~Shae

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