My Last Cut*Aly

by Mandz and Aly   Jan 8, 2007


Cloth wrapped tight around my wrist
Stop the blood my life is at risk
I did this so I stop it now
Look who I hurt, I'll take my bow
Look what happened and what I've done
The blood is poured and life is gone
I should have told you before you left
I should have but I did my best
I'm sorry to leave on such short notice
I'm sorry but I have to break my promise
I became so dependent on you
And I'm sorry to go
After all we've been through
But I just cant stay
I'm wanted no more my help is unneeded
And my blood's on the floor
My fear has won
And I'm sorry I let it win
But I got to weak to weak to begin
Life made sense and one point and time
But that time is long gone
And now the time is mine
Cloth wrapped tight around my wrist
Ill be waiting for you through the mist
I love you but its over
The blood is moving to fast to cover

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda ILynn

    Well i think i typed this one out for yah but good poem i like it alot love yah Mandz

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Great poem, the emotion really came across in your writing. Good write keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Watch out for the ' in your poems. cause it ends up putting lots of /// in it. so you should edit this.

    but apart from reading round that one word this was a great poem!

    5/5

    David

    David

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This poem is amazing, like seriously, it's really good! u r an amazing writer! i can really relate to this... great job!!

    *Shawte*