Love it .beautifull words written great job x

Goodness..Everyone of your poems are good. I have nothing bad to say about them. I have left like 5 comments. lol. You need to be a famous writer. You are awesome at it. Great job! 5/5 definately
Crystal

5/5 excellent poem.. sad lil story. *tear*

I really like this poem, it's basically how I'm feeling right now. Good job!

Very touching poem n_n
i've read a few of your others, this ones my favorite

keep writing, it has such a nice flow

A beautiful poem! i loved it so much!!

her teary eyes collapse,
her head falls to the pillow,
whether she makes it through the night,
will be unknown until tomorrow..
those words and lines were my favorite.
a lovely write indeed!
keep up the nice work.

Im in love with this poem, it kinda hit me at the perfect time.
Truly amazing job, I think its wonderful,
kaitlyn : )

Wow,
interesting poem, well written.

OCTOBER X

So sad, but beautiful.