What about your family?

by Chelsea   Jan 9, 2007


The pain in me is blinding
on the outside I can't stop crying
I wish theses tears would stop coming
in the inside I am dying

Through the years that are passing
you don't stop you just keep going
your family is quickly saddening
but you just stop caring

what is this helping
making you get all happy
for the time that is passing
but everything is worsening

we hate to see you dying
but you are slowly fading
away from the world and your family
but we never stop caring

I wish you could be a mommy
but you don't stop hiding
they keep you going
but what about your family?

-chelseaa;

(this is about my mom, please comment and tell me what you think =D)

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    So sad i wish i could hug you. your poem is so good . ican feel your pain in each word. man i feel so bad for you
    cy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    In some ways i can relate to this at the moment and it broke my heart =(
    Your flow was impeccable as always
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (Sure, email me, it's on my profile =)

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    :( Sad...but very good!
    xoxo

    P.S. Thanks for the soo sweet comment!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tamsin

    This is really well written and full of emotion which you expressed well.. really good job :)