Right Then, Right There

by Simple Sensation   Jan 10, 2007


You came to me,
A small moment when
I was in despair.
You took my life away, right then, right there.

Junk food all around,
I lost control. What could I do?
That small weak moment I needed you.
You took my life away, right then, right there.

And then, the panic took over.
How could I consume so much?
So that's when you first appeared.
You took my life away, right then, right there.

I knelt, my fear was there,
But hate overcame this fear
And my fingers touched my insides.
You took my life away, right then, right there.

Out it all came, falling into
The spinning swirls of water.
Remember the first time you appeared Mia?
You took my life away, right then, right there.

Simple Sensation
10th Jan 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow simply amazing work
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh honestly..this poem is iz amazin..and ur amazin writer as well..u have done a great joB here.. Most plp suffer cuz bulimia..we pray 4 them..my friend is in bulimia..this poem touched my heart..very well done..
    I loved it 5/5
    -sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Im sorry but that is scary to me, i thought about purging acouple times too but then i did research and it just messes up your insides, this is a really good poem thou i really like the flow and the way you repeated yourself! Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by `*`Silently_Hurting`*`

    Heyy this is a quite a good poem, it reminds me of someone i use to know.

    I like the repetitive lines, it seems to work in this poem.

    A job well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by I will love you Forever and not a day less

    Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

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