Welcome to Dreamhood.

by Taylor   Jan 11, 2007


Subtle wisps of cloud hang above the treetops,
inching quietly along the ocean of the air.
I gaze in solemn content at the sky above me,
whispering prayers to the God I see there.

And the trees stretch their barren fingers wide,
yawning in gentle gratitude at the morning's last light.
Saluting, paying their dues in one harmonious gesture,
I sigh a hello with them, to another handsome night.

How fleetingly the ghosts of our troubles
seem to blend, and melt into this softhearted abyss.
This heavenly kingdom derived from our eyes,
its nothing short of nature's miss of sweet bliss.

Swirls of conversation in our breaking eyes,
dreamily, they'd sing psalms if they only could,
about the white picket sign that becomingly read:
"Now exiting Reality. Welcome to Dreamhood."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brook

    This is so good! i love it. original topic too. but i love how it rhymes perfectly. good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow, this poem was amazing. It flowed so well. And it wasn't cliche at all. I loved the imagery.. it was so beautiful, and clear. I found no flaws what-so-ever, Absolutley perfect. Your vocabulary is uh-maze-ing!!!

    Excellent job. Keep it up, Hun.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is quite cleverly put together. The imagery is wonderful. I love your word choice. A nice change from the simple wrded poems I've been reading. Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Perfect.
    Your vocabulary was amazing, it wasn't too difficult to understand yet you didn't use the cliche words.
    The imagery was so vivid! =] Picturing everything in my mind.
    Overall, hun this was a perfect write. To me, it was completely flawless.
    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow... This poem is sooo good! It has an excellent vocabulary chioce, an excellent flow, great imagery.. Its amazing! It was really unique and out of all the poems ive read, this definately is unique. It also had great description. One thing that i think you hsould change is the punctuation, i mean one line ended with a commar, the next with a full satop. Thought you should ofused enjambment. But still an excellent read, keep it up, and i defo look forward to reading more! xx

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