Die Young

by Truest Lies   Jan 11, 2007


The wave crashes down her eye,
An inner tidal wave,
She couldn't hold it back,
It consumes the barrier of eyeliner,
And the water turns to black.
"I am sorry, so sorry," she says softly,
As she carefully cleans up her face.
"I look so dirty, I ruin the look of your clean place."
She smiles again, so softly,
Like a dull, bruising ache,
But you don't tell her that it's ok,
Oh, all she needs is a hug, for God's sake.
"I guess if this goes, I shall do young," she says, and her tone explains,
That she accepts this.
"I do not fear death" and her voice is almost whistful.
"I fear this life I have,
Life unlived."
She pauses for a moment,
And then sums it up.

"Better die young,
Than exist forever but spend not one minute of that time alive."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the way you opened up the poem, the "inner tidal wave", great imagery used. And the ending was quite sad, but its something we can all relate to at one point or another. It had a good flow throughtout it, good use of lanuage. It has a sad story in it. But its an excellent read! Keep uit up! xx