String

by Brian Hwang   Jan 11, 2007


You're like a string, you silly thing
You've thread yourself through all my thoughts
I think about you lots and lots
Around my heart, you've tied your knots

You silly thing, you're like a string
And everyday I see you giggle
Cause the more I try and wiggle
Get more tied up the more I wriggle

Oh silly string, you silly thing
Might as well give up the fight
Wrapped around me in daylight
And even in my dreams at night

You're like a string, you silly thing
I'm all tied up, I am I guess
Though I really must confess
I love that I'm YOUR tangled mess

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cherry

    Nice poem Brian... I liked it...you form an imagine in the readers head.... keep up the good work :)

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Great poem!
    Keep writing
    ♥
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Nevermore

    I thought it was sweet 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Aww So Cute. it is Dr Seuss Esk. haha. love it. it's great! 5. yea i dont say alot when i like it.

    hum the only thing i gotta say is that even though i like it, i hope the others aren't so kidish.. you know? a few like this are cool. but all are kinda annoying.

    xx3Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwwwwww how sweet..such a happy poem..good job! i like it!

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