The Only Moment We Were Alone

by Brian Hwang   Jan 11, 2007


And it's come to that time again,
And I'll kiss you like the dozens before,
But this time...I'm not kissing you;
You're hidden behind blue eyes,
And I just end up kissing the wall;

Your fingers are salty,
And your smell is everywhere...just everywhere;
So wherever I fall, I've fallen into you...

You breathe in my ear,
And I whisper back...
I don't know what's being said,
It's a different language we're speaking now.

And I'm like everyone else,
And you're like, noone else
And let it happen...and let it happen...
And it shouldn't happen...but it happens...
And never again...
It's the only moment, we were alone

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Beautiful vivid description. Awesome imagery!
    5/5
    ♥
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    That poem had a good rhyme and flow to it. i had to read it a couple of times to get what you were trying to express, but well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Ooh. Spine Tingling. i love this one as well. it flowed wonderfully even with out rhyme. and the language was great. your a poet that can write wide varieties of poems well.

    x33 Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Its gripping how you described this person with phrases that aren't common. Atleast, I think thats what you're doing haha. I reread it, and then I started to get the gist of the overall emotions you were trying to display. I think it was well written because it sounded like something you would say in your mind, and because it didn't seem forced. Good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Usually I don't like non-rhyming poems, but this was an exception.
    I liked the flow and the first few lines really plled me in.
    I think you did an excellent job.

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