Feeling

by Alyce   Jan 11, 2007


I sit in the bath tub getting the cold and nasty shiver up and down my body,yes the one you left.

I sit here with the thoughts of you running through my head.
Why did you do this as well with my best friend?

How cold you must be to leave me lingering in the dark!!

You stand in the same spot ,in the same place when you had the same talk with me but there is one difference instead theres my best friend.

Or when you hugged her telling me to join in as i walked into the bar,after came to hug me

It still hurt ,what you did to me made my heart burn like a raging fire.....

Now i sit in the tub with the cold and nasty shiver up and down my body yes the one you left!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Danielle

    I love the way you began and ended the poem, it made it seem complete. it wasnt an ending that seemed to drift off into space. the imagery that you used was absolutly fantastic. sitting here and thinking of staying in the tub till i was chill makes me shiver. great job, i love it. keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I liked the way you wrote this poem, it was really well penned, well done.

    (check out some of mine if u have time ta)

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