Wow.
I really liked this one.
It reminds me slightly of my recent relationship failure.
It was really nice, except a few parts where the lines didn't flow,
but the rhymes were perfect.
I wish I were as clever as you.
I hope you feel better soon.
Take care.

--SJG.

Oh my, you've left me speechless once again.
Although sometimes it sounded a bit wrong,
it still somehow fit together right.
You can do amazing things with words.
Dont stop writing,
beause I would love to keep reading.
Stay Cool.
Meg
XD

Wow, you are amazing at writing these poems. Keep it up! These are beautiful!

You've added so much emotion into your poems in such short verses. To think being there for someone whether they know or not and selflessy giving up your time and devotion for them. Nice, good write and nice flow. An automatic 5/5
=D

-Bon

I really love this poem... I can really relate it to what I am feeling right now in my life. It is absolutely beautifully written.

Soal taking, i like it!!!

Nice, rolo!

i always love reading your stuff!!!
love love love it

The title captured my attention since I write love notes to this guy all the time, but dont actually give it to him. I loved it so much, it discribes what I feel so perfectly..
The rhyming was great, not the lame kind of rhyming that sounds so weird, but the really good kind of rhyming, that gives the poem a flow..
I loved your choice of words.. and the message that was behind them..
My favorite was:
Nothing is forever, but you help me prove it wrong
My love for you is effortless, and endlessly long.

5/5
take care x