by XxsilencedxX Jan 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Of all the love in the world |
by aisyned
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Good job dude! |
by Bethany M
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This poem is depressing but good... 5/5...if you get the chance you should read and rate one of my poems....i think you would like "The Lies" or "Who To Love" the best |
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Not bad. But, it was a little choppy if you know what I mean. I may go as far as saying it was a little forced... But still good, Here's a 4. You painted quite an image. |