If you would be mine..

This poem is about dreaming someone.. Obviously you were just fell in love with her in the time you wrote.. I like this part of love very much. Why? Because nobody can hurt us in love in the first part, when the person we love does not know we love him/her, he won't also hurt us..

And the poem reminded me about my friend, a guy. He said when is alone and single he has no power to approve his life. He needs someone to give this world to. Yeah, I guess for some persons it is like this..

The love give some much positive energy.

Well-written poem.

A beautyful written.... Nice. . . . .:)

I love this poem it was great. Wish I had a guy that wrote me something like that. Keep it up.

Good poem i liked it i can feel thoughts keep up the writing.

~inpain~

Great job! This is such a great poem.

if you would be mine
then I hold you in my arms for always

I love this stanza! It is such a wonderful thought to be always wrapped in the arms of the one you love.