This was very interesting and i especially liked the ending. 5/5

:-), i love it..

Thats a really good poem!
keep writing :)
KristenM

Well done, i liked this one. you have talent
keep writing,
love Tara-Kay

Lol this is another interesting poem but very good a 5/5 for me =)

I think instead of 'wanna' you should have wrote I want to.
Because, it's more powerful.. like
'I wanna live as i want
To sleep at days,awake at nights
I wanna laugh like nobody cares
I wanna cry like a baby
If i wasn't cared

It would be,
I want to live as I want,
to sleep at days, awake at nights.
I want to laugh like nobody cares,
I want to cry like a baby,
If I wasn't cared.

I think that sounds more powerful.
Good Job.

I liked it. u just should change cos to cus but yea 5/5

5/5. Aww this made me laugh. Good poem!

Happy Valentines Day!

This one was great ur a great writer keep it up

There is a spelling error in 1st stanza but another good poem and watch your english some time cos and wanna ruin things

This poem seems unfinished and very ghetto sounding

"i dont want no drama"?

i do not want any drama would sound better in my opinion 3/5