A feeling you cant understand

by bethany   Jan 13, 2007


Liquid pours down,
Onto my hand.
The warmth of my palm,
Combine with the cool water.
Gentle trickles fall through my fingers.
I cant understand the feeling,
Of warmth,
And coolness,
And comfort.
Soothing waves splash against my face,
Covering my tears.
Hiding my pain.

***I know this poem is very short. its not one of my best. Please vote for it, because Ive just started writing poetry, and i need an honest opinion, so i can get better. I never rhyme, though, so if it is not your style, I'm sorry. I chose a different topic to try something new. If you like it, most of my poems will be in the sadness/depression category, because those categories are my strengths. thanks. please vote!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Steph

    Well i liked it i dont see why you dont..haha but yes you can use mine for you away msg thingy =]