Will It Really Last?

by Mousie   Jan 14, 2007


We know our love
Passion of deep,
Unfathomable words
For the feelings we reap.

Speak of the future
Of what it beholds,
Dreams of tomorrow
Lives they unfold.

Such a long time
Arouses the question,
Under the rug
We push it again.

We say it is different
We've forgotten our past,
But I wanna know
Will it really last?

ahh just pondering today, hope you like it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Again, this poem is great!!! ur an amazing writer, you know just how to use your words!

    Forever*Yours

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Proof of a great vocabulary. Great rythm, awesome meaning, and i love the short choppy lines. Great poem.
    5/5
    ♥
    ~Stephen White

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow, I DO like it. It was very heart felt and beautiful, great work.

    --Steph

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