Its all over

by michael   Jan 14, 2007


Sometimes at night
When I look at the sky
I start thinking of you
And then I ask myself �¢??why�¢??

Why do I like you?
I ponder and smile
Because I know the list
Could run a mile

The whisper of your voice
The warmth of your touch
So many little things
Make me love you so much

The way you support me
Even my silly notions
The way that you care
And show such devotion

The way that your kiss
Fills me with desire
And how you hold me
With the warmth of fire

The way your eyes shine
When you look at me
Lost in them forever
Is were I want to be

The way that I feel
When you�¢??re by my side
A sense of completion
And over flowing pride

The dreams that I dream
That all involve you
The possibilities I see
The things we can do

How you finish the puzzle
That lies inside my heart
How deep in my soul
You are in intricate part

I can go on for days
Telling you what I feel
But all you must know
Is �¢?�¦�¢?�¦. My love for you is
Real

this is for brittni hope u dont get mad

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  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    That was such a grat poem. feelings are defined very well in this poem. flow was also very good. an excellent pic of love. gr8 wrk.

  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    The whisper of your voice
    The warmth of your touch
    So many little things
    Make me love you so much
    ^^ If someone felt that about me i would drop dead! That was amazing i loved it! And like the others said...Your girl has to be pretty darn lucky to have you! great job and keep it up! ~peanutt~

  • 17 years ago

    by keep breathing

    I really like your poem i think it is reallly good i think that, that girl is soo lucky to have some1 like you likeing her

  • 17 years ago

    by Evie

    I like it...And the other poems too. I was reading them, and some are a bit confusing, but they are still ready good. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Awwwwww. This was so beautiful! It almost brought tears to my eyes. I wish a man thought like that about me. Your girl must be very lucky. Great poem!