Hey! ur poems really good! I like the last sentence alot, the whole "that night under the stars". It has a good feel to it =). Keep on writing! Cheers!

Wow Julie is speechless... I really like this poem. Its really sweet... Its got really good flowing! hehe that sounds funny...lol
Well Good work hun, keep up the good writing, and always follow your dreams, dont give up your dreams for anyone!
Love Julie
xoxo

That was a wonderful write that shows you are truly writing from the heart. Great job!

sadaddy

Very wel done dear it really shows real feelings..good job5/5

God bless u

This is so beautiful and touching. such a great image- a night under the stars. reminded me of a mariah carey song i used to listen to. great poem x

WOw, good job... i really like this,...
it goes together really good, and easy to understand...gj
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Love the poem keep writin