Can I be free now?

by Kelsey   Jan 16, 2007


Can I be free now?
Will you let me be free?
I don't need to be here anymore.
I know you all would agree.

I see no reason I'm alive;
There's no point anymore.
So let me go;
Let me fall to the floor.

No one will care;
And no one will notice when I've gone away
You'll all be glad to see me gone;
So let's do it my way?

No one will miss me either;
I give up on life
Let me be free
Just let me go get the knife.. =[

I hate waking up to this living nightmare
It's the same thing everyday of every week
If it stays this way; I'll always come home to cry
I guess I'm just really weak

So let me end my misery
Let me be free for good
I'm sure it'll end yours too
Well, it should end your misery to see me gone; it should...

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  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    The meaning of this poem was simple yet it was SOOOOOOOO deep. you feeel like this person is just so anxious just to let go and give up :( good job .......keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I see no reason I'm alive;
    There's no point anymore.
    So let me go;
    Let me fall to the floor.

    such strong lines. i loved all this poem. well done!

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    Truely amazing. i can relate to it alot. i dn't know what to say. i lke it alot. 5/5
    love willow xxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!!
    I liked the imagery and wording, and I thought the rhyme scheme worked well.
    I thought the flow was off on the last line but apart from that you did a wonderful job.