I love this!!! its a great feeling isnt it?!?!
liz

Kay so unlike all these poeple being the smart person that i am, i realize just now that YOU USED ALL FIVE SENSES WHEN YOU DISCRIBED THE THINGER FEELING MABOBBY!!!!!! wooo goo you. and yeah so yeah. at first i didn't really like this poem. but now that you read it to me cause you know i cant read well i like it more. but def not as much as some of your other poems but its good. GO YOU CHICKY!!!!

You have a great talent and I must say the last phrase touched my heart the day when my fiancea asked me to marry him he said I just want to grow old with you
in my language Ek wil net saam met jou oud word believe me when I read it
I could not believe that those words said by someone else will mean so much again 5/5 and I was voter 102 and I think you can act... have a 6/5 ;)

Magical poem!! melting.....

Awww this is so sweet. It made me think of my boyfriend and how I feel about him. This poem is very good. Great job at writing it.
Crystal

Beautiful poem. I loved it. I wish I had some one I cared about enough to spend my whole life with him. Your love poems are great. Another 5/5 :)

Good work

Very good poem becca, loved the flow and the end, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

This was good. Not a new subject, but good. It was sweet and simply expressing the cute feelings of new love. Thanks for sharing.

Oh wow. i found this poem so catchy. the entire time i was reading it i had this smile on my face because i just knew there was something wonderful at the end of it. and i was right! the ending was absolutely precious! wonderful writing. 5/5

Awwwh, I loved this!
I thought the flow was perfect and you did a great job with the imagery.
Excellent work.

LAMP

this poem really caught my attention with the name. Very interesting. My favorite part about this poem was how you managed to make it sweet and interesting all while still keeping the lines very short. Nice work

Good poem your a talented writer

I liked it, but there were no details. Try to add some length onto your lines and it will be much more effective. And some of the rhymes seemed forced. Lol hate to also point it out, check your grammer (Apostrophes, etc.)

All in all, pretty nice.

This poem was filled with love... loved this stanza

"I feel your breath
I'm in a daze
So magical
Close to your face"

keep it up!

This is another beautiful poem of yours. i know a lot of people who r in love would feel like that. 5/5

Kalee

Aww. this was soo sweet! the words were simple, yet perfect. you said all that was needed to say. great work babe
much love and many kisses,
bex

Beautiful flow
beautifully written
i love the message
i love how the words
were like puzzle pieces
they belonged to eachother
so very very very well written
i definatly dug it