If You Love Her, Let Her Go

Aaah very touchy.. and lovely. friend it realy touched deep side in my heart. you work is greeat. take care 5/5

Aww.. this is sweet.. i love that you still wish the best for her.. this poem was written beautifully.. it breathes poetry.. again each line is really strong.. you have a talent.. you seem to find the perfect balance of describing your whats going on inside and letting out your thougts of her.. its the perfect balance of talking about the wounds inside you and pain and then talking about how much you miss her and wish the best for her.. overall just another beautiful poem..

o yeah and i LOVE this stanza

"Time may never heal these wounds
Even when new love has made way
She will never come back to me
And hope is all that I have left"

Another very nice poem. I think there are people who could relate to it. Another 5/5

AW. Dariennnnnn. I loveee it. Srsly :] It was amazing. It flowed really good. & was just so sad, yet so sweet. I loved the last stanza. It deffinitley summed this up perfectly.

Maybe one day we will meet again
And remember the days we shared
We will be living our own life
Alone, married, no one will know

^ I liked this stanza.. but for some reason, i don't know.. but, the last line Kind of.. made me stop & had to re-read it. I just like.. stumbled over it.

In my heart her memory will stay
And I will never forget our love
Even when I've cried my last tear
I will never forget what we were

Time may never heal these wounds
Even when new love has made way
She will never come back to me
And hope is all that I have left

^ THIS IS AMAZING. I LOVEEEE THESE TWO STANZAS. PERFECT.

Beautifully penned.

Bri [x]

This is so heartbreaking,

You know what...people change my friend...
She might have been wonderful...
but someone who hurts as such, is not wonderful anymore.
That person is cruel.

Please take care...
Youve always been there for me...
and i always am too....

God bless you
Dhaval