Fade

by XXXrocknrollhunniXXX   Jan 18, 2007


Ignore the pain
she dosent feel it
shes insane

No soul
No Expression
Not one care
Not even a smirk
Just a cold hard stare

Her stare will cut you like a razor blade
I watch her eyes they close and her life will fade

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kate

    Great poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Sorry, but this just looks hurried and halfhearted. "Her stare will cut you like a razor blade" is just too good a line to be set amongst 10 lines of dismal prose. I'm sorry if this seems harsh, but as Confused Child says, it could do with being longer, and better structured I say. Without dragging it out, I agree.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Hmm. its okay. I mean... part of me is screaming make it longer... but.. the other sides like... you shouldn't drag it on if you have nothing more to say...

  • 18 years ago

    by Hes the one who holds me tight

    WOWY that was crazyness 5/5

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