Beautiful and haunting. *5/5

Wowwwww deep and dark i love it
5/5++++++++{

This is even better than the first .. i feal so much meaning reading it and i love the flow of words

Wow! This one's my favourite! I love these stanzas:

"Death comes
On prancing steed
To take me away
As I slowly bleed

Galloping off
Into the night
Darkness comes
Erase my light"

Great imagery once again! And very smooth flow! Excellent job! 5/5

Wow this was short but extremely gud! well done on an excellent and emotion filled write!
5/5
Luv FallenxFromxGrace xoxo

Totally beautiful and haunting. g8 job on this one is 2 awesome!!!

This one totally blew me away. it was amazing :) great job! keep it up!

- resse

OOooh, I like this a lot. A prancing Steed... nice line there. Very to the point. Leaves a lot to the imagination. Good job. 5/5!

Another very nicely written peice of poetry, short and to the point. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

I absolutely loved this. Although It was short and simple, it had true meaning and great imagery. Excellent job.

Short but so meaningful,liked it,good job 5/5

That was really different. I could definity feel the dark side of you. Keep it up.

Hmm, I didnt like the fact that you started the previous poem with 'Crimson' it really does take away from originality. Seems over played and old. Good effort though.

Again another really good poem. I liked the face you made it into a horse very good :) 5/5

This poem is beautifully written!!! i love it!!! great job! 5/5!!

Forever*Yours

That poem read very smoothly and I enjoyed reading it! 5/5 Great work!

Truly an artistic masterpiece :P

It was beautifully written.
best wishes
and take care

Wow
that was amazing

Loved it loved it loved it
nice quick poem to read but meant so much