Untouched

by My Decadent   Jan 19, 2007


Between walls of darkness it lays,
Never listened to a word it says
But I can feel it breaking inside
And hope I can help it survive,

Because if it would ever die
So shall the world and you will cry
For hatred and anger are locked within
Along with the list of your each and every sin.

So many times by malice clutched
And always by love untouched,
My blackened heart sobbs in silence
Hoping for feelings untouched by violence.

I am Death and your time has come,
My untouched heart is now undone,
It's now broken and feelings pour out
And the remnant pieces can't stand your shout.

© My Decadent

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Comment # 5

    okay just kidding.. so THIS is definitly my favorite.. i mean its soo perfect.. the word choice is truely spectacular and the rhymes and flow is flawless.. the description is great.. all around a really great poem and enjoybale read

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Wow, dark and brutal. The line "I am Death and your time is come" is so powerful, I absolutely love it. Please continue posting your dark poems, I am very much enjoying them!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This was really dark the third stanza was my favourite it was so haunting n powerful, well done