It was good.. in some parts the flow was a little off, but i still liked it... a sad poem, but i liked what you were trying to get across, nice poem

Flowed okay, some parts were a little rocky but that didnt matter because i loved this poem. It was quite sad to read but i enjoyed it very much.
Keep writing,
love Tara-Kay

Awwwwwww this is so sad! i really enjoyed reading this poem!..the flow was kind of off in a few places..but overall it was really good!!
5/5

Wow, this was beautifully written. The flow was well as the structure was great. The emotion within was outstanding. Wonderful job, keep up the amazing work. You are truly a great poet.

Peace, Joe

Lovely. Again. Title matched the Poem. And left the explanation of the title in the ending. Again. Some rhymes could use some more effort. But that still has no affect on how remarkable your poem is. This poem required Interpretation since you do not say "Who" the person you are talking about. By my Figure of "He" and "Loving child", And of coarse "Fishing in the Lakes". I would hypothesize it could be your Father. Or. A Bigger brother. Most Likely Father... but enough information was left to let me get to this conclusion. so I love it. I give your poem 5/5.

What a wonderful poem. This really touched my heart. Excellent job!

I really enjoyed this poem keep up the good work .

mary

I really loved this. the flow i thought was good. keep up the great work =)

I liek this very much :) it is very touching :) I gave you a 5 out of 5 ;)

I love this poem!!

Beautifully written! i loved every line!! amazing!!! keep it up!! =o]

Hi, wow this is a really good poem, well l8trz ~Sam~

Awww.. spectacular poem.. another great one.!!! you can tell its very heartfelt.. keep it up

That poem had great energy. It flowed smoothly and it even rhymed! As I read this, I felt a stab at my heart. You see, someone I knew passed away the other day, so I can definatly relate to how you feel. 5/5